first ever poems i wrote.

Hello readers!

In this blog, I will be sharing two poems, that I wrote back in fifth grade.

I went out on a one-day camp-out with my school.

[I will write a blog about the camp later]

At night, I wasn’t feeling sleepy. So, I and my two other friends talked for a bit. [ I made a few new friends at the camp]. 

Then, outside the tent, I noticed the beautiful sky, with lots of twinkling stars, it was the most mesmerizing view of the sky I had ever seen. I showed my friends, we put our pillows, such that we could do some star gazing.

That’s when I quickly grabbed my pen and started writing. In the end, it turned out as a poem! I showed It to the teachers, and they said that it was awesome! I looked back at the poem; it was actually pretty good!

 I wrote another one.

Down below, I have edited the poems I wrote; 

                                     STARS.

As I wonder looking at the sky,

ORIGINAL POEM

Thoughts are filled in my mind.

I saw a beautiful shooting star, but

it vanished. I was deep in thought…

will I find my true passion? Will I really follow it?

Just then, my thoughts started disappearing;

As a furious wind hit our tent.

Today was great, I hope everyday will be.

Bye, bye for now, I gotta go to sleep!

                                 X _____X

I looked back at this poem yesterday, and I was quite surprised!

This is the second poem I wrote…

 ORIGINAL.

                                   ONE SHINE.

As I was gazing at the sky,

I saw a star shine. The brightest shine.

I imagined it was me, I hope I would shine like that star

one day; but even brighter, as I would prove

I’m a smart worker.

                                  X______X

You see, these aren’t actually the original verses, I edited them .

  That's it for this post!